zorosoro's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Travelling]

I feel like there's something off about the arm in the background. Judging by how thin the character is it looks like more of the arm should be exposed, assuming it's in a resting position. Like maybe an elbow from the back, or a hand on the platform she's sitting on.

RubyDAnimator responds:

thanks for your advice, will be sure to look on it on my future works.

[Nice Find]

Painting and styling on point. I just personally think the right ring finger (the hand further away from view) that's sticking out is too sharp.

YakovlevArt responds:

fair critique. I did have a tough time with that hand, but didn't want to perfect it. so i got it to a point I was happy with and moved on.